Monday, March 03, 2008

Bashir Badr - VI

This is the last post on Bashir Badr [for now, at least :-) ]

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Isi shahar mei.n kaii saal se mere kuch kariibii ajeez hai.n
Unhei.n meri kuch khabar nahii.n mujhe unka kuch pataa nahii.n


Many of my near and dear ones reside in the same city since years
They have no news of me, and I have no knowledge about them


Ah, how true. It is indeed a selfish world – people forget all about others until they need them …


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Kabhi dhoop de kabhi badliyaa.n dil-o-jaan se dono kabool hai.n
Magar us mahal mei.n na kaid kar jahaa.n zindagi ki havaa na ho


Tere akhtiyaar mei.n kya nahii.n mujhe is tarah se navaaz de

Yuu.n duyaaei.n meri kabool ho.n mere lab pe koii duaa na ho


Give me sunshine, give me clouds, I accept both whole-heartedly

But do not imprison me in a palace that does not get the breath of life


What is beyond your power? Bless me in such a way

My prayers are accepted so that there is no prayer on my lips


These couplets depict another beautiful aspect of [urdu/hindi] poetry – an address to the Lord, whom you believe in, whom you accept as all-knowing, all powerful, and yet to whom you can complain, request about His world …

The idea of the first couplet here is not a novel one, but the presentation definitely is. And it reminds me of another thing about which I have wondered a few times – in Indian poetry, ‘dhoop’ (sunshine) represents hardships, while clouds are synonymous with relief or pleasant times. From my impression based on a rather limited knowledge, the symbols are used in an opposite way in English poetry. Something to do with our tropical summers? ;-)
The second line in the second couplet is quite interesting, I could make two different interpretations out of it (which seem rather opposite) 
- Accept my prayer so that I do not have a need to have more prayers, i.e. all my wishes are fulfilled before I seek their fulfilment
- My prayer is that I do not have any prayer – I want to be completely content with what I have, and do not wish for anything more

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Ik dooje se mil kar poore hote hai.n
Aadhi aadhi ek kahani ham dono


Mai.n dehleej ka deepak hoo.n aa tez havaa

Raat gujaarei.n apni apni ham dono


We are complete when we meet each other

We are two halves of a story


I am the lamp of the doorstep, come o strong wind

Let us both spend the night in our own pursuits


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6 comments:

L o r d R a j said...

Kabhi dhoop de kabhi badliyaa.n dil-o-jaan se dono kabool hai.n
Magar us mahal mei.n na kaid kar jahaa.n zindagi ki havaa na ho

Tere akhtiyaar mei.n kya nahii.n mujhe is tarah se navaaz de
Yuu.n duyaaei.n meri kabool ho.n mere lab pe koii duaa na ho

WAAH!

Welcome back Sigmaa

Sigma said...

@Raj: Thanks. Glad you liked it ...

Anonymous said...

Loved the first couplet and yeah you made very fine observation on the sunshine and clouds....!

Leziblogger said...

Blessed is a poet who can write equally well in various meters...lovely!!!

btw, glad to see you back in action!

Anonymous said...

Here I come.. Late lateef.. :P

Had read your posts thru reader.. coming now to welcome you. :)

Aa always all the couplets are very good and if you ask me.. my instant meaning for that 2nd line of last couplet was your 1st meaning. Comes instantly.

Keep posting.

GMG said...

Lovely post!
Welcome back Sigma. Hope you're feeling better now!
Thanks for your comments at Blogtrotter.
Have a great weekend!